The world as seen by Ana

Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby ladyana » 09 Oct 2020, 15:48

Here's some more self written poetry for those of ya who fan of mine. (Jokin) ;)
I would love feedbacks!!
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby nefeliethan » 09 Oct 2020, 16:25

ladyana wrote:Here's some more self written poetry for those of ya who fan of mine. (Jokin) ;)
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby AndreeaG » 09 Oct 2020, 16:52

ladyana wrote:Here's some more self written poetry for those of ya who fan of mine. (Jokin) ;)
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby Lady Alexandra » 09 Oct 2020, 17:09

ladyana wrote:Here's some more self written poetry for those of ya who fan of mine. (Jokin) ;)
I would love feedbacks!!
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first off, :wub: :wub: :wub:
second off, :love: :love: :love:
thirdly, I think that the last line is very strong compared to the whispering I imagine someone reading this in.
but if you don't do that, it's totally fine, because the contrast still supports your message (dream:reality, soft:loud)

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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby Harshita » 09 Oct 2020, 17:11

Are you a nyctophile Ana? If you are, here's your owl friend.
Do you remember the topic in forum where we are asked to describe the previous author by their signature and avatar, I got yours and described you as Optimist, so the ending of the poem seems a little different than the word I suggested. But anyhow, I enjoyed the poem :) . Keep composing more. Who knows you may one day be the next Robert Frost!
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby ladyana » 09 Oct 2020, 17:42

Harshita wrote:Are you a nyctophile Ana? If you are, here's your owl friend.
Do you remember the topic in forum where we are asked to describe the previous author by their signature and avatar, I got yours and described you as Optimist, so the ending of the poem seems a little different than the word I suggested. But anyhow, I enjoyed the poem :) . Keep composing more. Who knows you may one day be the next Robert Frost!
Good luck

I'm a nyctophile. Also a selenophile, astrophile, and it goes on and on.
I am an optimist. I am a realist. I am a peccimist.
It all matters on what time you're catching me.
I have wild (to say the least) mood swings.
I am feel too high and in a bit, too low, without any apparent reason.
The mood changes aren't harmful to those around me.
It's more like, I have a tough time getting a grip over all emotions of mine. And also, I don't let them out in an aggressive manner but through something productive like writing a poem or something not destructive like scribbling.
I am mature and emotionally supportive and equally sensitive. This often helps me interpret the feelings of those around me or those seeking my help.
Did I make sense? :blink:
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby AndreeaG » 09 Oct 2020, 17:46

Yup! You were blessed with a pretty cool personality :P It is the best when people can transform their emotion/ mood swings in sth productive. The best I got is listening to music and trust me, it is a big waste of time when you listen to that song for 10273th time -_-
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby ladyana » 09 Oct 2020, 17:47

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ladyana wrote:Here's some more self written poetry for those of ya who fan of mine. (Jokin) ;)
I would love feedbacks!!
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first off, :wub: :wub: :wub:
second off, :love: :love: :love:
thirdly, I think that the last line is very strong compared to the whispering I imagine someone reading this in.
but if you don't do that, it's totally fine, because the contrast still supports your message (dream:reality, soft:loud)

kudos!

Yeah! Right?
Unpredictable ;)
Just how I like it.
I had some serious internal conflict while putting that line at the last.. It totally sounds ominous. I admit.
But at last, thought, why not?
The key point here is: I wouldn't like people to know what comes next in my poems. If it all were the same, why would they bother reading mine? :) :wub:
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby ladyana » 09 Oct 2020, 17:49

AndreeaG wrote:Yup! You were blessed with a pretty cool personality :P It is the best when people can transform their emotion/ mood swings in sth productive. The best I got is listening to music and trust me, it is a big waste of time when you listen to that song for 10273th time -_-

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Oh don't you worry!
I listen to a song for the 10274th time too! ;)
You know how a song just becomes your jam :D
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Re: The world as seen by Ana

Postby Lady Alexandra » 09 Oct 2020, 19:20

ladyana wrote:
AndreeaG wrote:Yup! You were blessed with a pretty cool personality :P It is the best when people can transform their emotion/ mood swings in sth productive. The best I got is listening to music and trust me, it is a big waste of time when you listen to that song for 10273th time -_-

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I listen to a song for the 10274th time too! ;)
You know how a song just becomes your jam :D

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